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 Whiteheart<------- SkyClan deputy
« Thread Started on May 28, 2008, 8:28pm »

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Name: Whiteheart

Past and Future Names: Whitekit,Whitepaw

Gender: She-Cat

Age: 29 Moons

Clan: SkyClan

Rank: Deputy

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Personality:

Whiteheart is a very sweet she-cat. She puts other's before herself at all times especially in times of danger. If there was a fire she would go back and rescue a kit because she wants them to live because Life is short so everyone she get a chance to live it. Of course she is also very brave. She would stand up to anything though some people consider it reckless she doesn't because she knows bravery is a good quality to have. Without bravery they would be has weak has mice.She is also a very wise she cat. She earned this trait from her mentor but she is one people can trust to keep their secrets or help console them or even help them when they need advice though she may not always have the anwsers she does a fair amount of the time of the time if you actually give her time to think it through. She is also loyal. She would never turn on her clan exspecially in times of need. She had been told that is one of the qualities that make her a good deputy and one day, hopefully, a good leader. Of course just because she is smart, brave and loyal doesn't mean she is the best cat in the forest. To be precise no one is. She is strong though foolish at times. She can't seem to hold her tongue when it comes to things which leads her to fight sometimes with other members of different clans and sometimes her own clan. She is a strict cat though not very. If you break a tiny rule she doesn't see the need in punishment and she does like to goof off. She likes to play with the kits and tell jokes. She makes a good SkyClan deputy because she has the skills needed and the bravery. She has the strength needed to back up her leader whenever necissary an to talk control of her clan. That doesn't just describe Whiteheart for you. It tells you why she makes a good SkyClan deputy.


Description:
Whiteheart is a very beautiful white she-cat so her name fits beautifully. She isn't specifically a long hair or short hair because she only has it short in Spring and Summer and long in Fall and Winter to keep out the cold. Though is size she would probably be classified has a medium sized cat. Her legs are long and good for running and her claws are sharp and ready to battle. Her eyes though are a beautiful light blue color. Under them is a pink nose and under that are razor sharp fangs. Of course it is a good thing to have white fur in the winter because she blend into your surrondings so even for the scarce prey Whiteheart manages to catch a good amount, especially of birds since they fly south for the winter.


History:

Everyone in SkyClan heard the loud yowl that came from the Nursery has Roseheart prepared to have her kits. Of course Roseheart was young so she had a full life ahead of her. She lay there in the Nursery while the Medicine Cat tended to her. When she was finished she let everyone come and look. She let her mate, Nightsong, come last though. She had decided to let him help her pick names. They had 4 extrordinary kits. One White she-cat has snow with beautiful blue eyes was named Whitekit. 1 Tortiseshell she-cat with beautful amber eyes and fur with splotches of black and light brown was named Waterkit. A Black she-cat with emerald green eyes and fur has dark has Ravens was named Ravenkit. Then the last kit was was a brown tom with blue eyes and fur like dust was named Dustkit. The kits lived happily in the Nursery for 6 whole months playing with the other kits and their kin. At night of there turning of 6 moon they were named apprentices. Whitepaw,Waterpaw,Ravenpaw and Dustpaw. Whitepaws mentor was Dancingstream who taught the young foolish she-cat about wisdom. She taught the she-cat how to battle and catch pray and about the warrior code. Then has tension between SkyClan and ThunderClan hit it's max the two clans went into battle.

Of the four only Whitepaw and Dustpaw went. That is where the accident happened. Whitepaw and Dustpaw were battling side by side with a ThunderClan tom when she heard the familiar yowl of sorrow and she turned to see her mother laying flat on the ground. Blood oozed out of her throat and she gurgled something unknown until she lay still. Whitepaw was able to see the tom who had done it by him caniving smile and she fought him to his last breath. With one surprised swipe of her paw blood began to ooze from his throat and he soon lay still. Whitepaw let out a triumphant yowl when she noticed the battle was over and ThunderClan was retreating. SkyClan had one though when she looked through the clearing she saw her father, the SkyClan deputies limp form and she yowled with sorrow. Has she mourned him and her dead mother. When they returned to the camp Dancingstream told the leader of Whitepaws courage and how she defeated the ThunderClan warrior.Whitepaw was held her warrior ceremony at 14 moons old. She became Whiteheart and soon after came her brother and sisters.

Many battles have been faught since then and of course everyone knew of her courage and she was the sole one who everyone knew was going to become deputy after the deputy died. She had already had an apprentice named Snowpaw who is now called Snowstorm and of course that was when she made friends with Hawktalon. She fell in love with the tom and soon there love became shared and one night Whiteheart found she was preganant she knew one who was pregnant couldn't become deputy and she knew she wanted it so bad and that if the other person one she would never have the chance to become deputy for a moment has she thought she would be choosing Ambiton over Love but when ThunderClan attacked the camp the other nominee was killed and she knew no one else was fit to lead the clan. At birth she gave her kit to a she-cat who had been pregnant the same time and had her kit the same time. Only 2 knew of her being pregnant and that was the Medicine Cat and the queen who raised her kit.

After the deputy died in a battle she was named new deputy and has been ever since. Also she remains mated to the Tom Hawktalon. Of course Berrykit, now Berrypaw has learned of who his mother really is after being told. Of course he was upset but soon he learned of why and he knew it was her only choice if she wanted the clan and him to have a good life to he accepted her and knows though that he can't show so much affection towards her unless alone which he does. Now ready and still SkyClan deputy she is ready for what is to come in the forest.




Relationships:

Mother: Roseheart<-------Mother-Deceased

Father: Nightsong<------Tom-Deceased

Siblings:
Waterstorm<-----She-cat-Warrior-SkyClan
Ravensong<------She-cat-Queen-SkyClan
Duststorm<--------Tom-Warrior-SkyClan

Mate: Hawktalon<------Tom-SkyClan

Kits:

Berrypaw<------- Apprentice In SkyClan-Knows is mother though was raised by another She-Cat

Mentor: Dancingstream

Apprentice: Snowpaw{Now SnowStorm}{Former}

Other:

Other:

Roleplay Example:
Whiteheart opened her icy blue eyes and saw the first rays of dawn in the warriors den. Doing a weird human like yawn she stood and stretched her muscles, which were sore from the night before. Padding her way out of the den she blinked trying to get her eyes to adjust to the morning sun. Her ears pricked and her head turned has she heard paws padding towards her. Her fur prickled though relaxed has she noticed it was DawnPelt and Jetstream. Purring a welcome to them the returned the welcome purr to her. "What is it Dawnpelt, Jetstream" the white she-cat purred towards the warriors. "Who shall go out on Dawn patrol?" Dawnpelt asked her. Whiteheart stared at the she-cat thinking for a moment. "You and Jetstream and you can take LeafDapple and Rainpaw with you" The she-cat said said to the black one infront of her. Dawnpelt nodded her head before walking away to get the other warrior and her apprentice.

"Rosenose" Whiteheart yowled at the she-cat who padded up to her. "Please fetch Lilypaw and Miraclewhisker" she said to the she-cat who ran off and came back a few moments later. "Come we are going on hunting patrol" she ordered and padded off being followed by the others. Padding into the forest she sniffed the air and sensed a few squirrels, mice and a vole and then her nose detected something else. A stench no one could ever reaplce and she growled. "Fox" she said adn sniffed the air, she followed the scent being briskly followed until she met with the ugly red creature. She hissed and pulled back ready to pounce at the creature which hissed at her. "Now!" she ordered adn jumped at the fox being pursued by the others. Whiteheart dug her claws into the red fur and bit the horrid creature on the ear.

She noticed Miraclewhisker had been kicked into a rock and was bleeding slightly. The distraction was enough for whiteheart to be thrown off and she hissed has her back connect with a tree trunk. A yowl erupted from her has she stood back up and rushed into battle. Biting at the muzzle soon she let go has the fox ran howling off into the bushes. They let out a triumpant yowl before walking over to Miraclewhisker who looked to be in bad shape. Hissing she took the warrior by her scruff and dragged her back towards the Skyclan camp. Rushing in she took Miraclewhisker and lay her down in the Medicine Cats den, while in the Medicine Cats Den ahe explained how it had happen and gave Miracle whisker a lick and refused to have her injuries taken care of. She had to report to Maplestar. She padded through towards the Leaders den and explained to her what had happened.


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ShadowClan
Mintpaw<----Apprentice

RiverClan
Dapplepool<----Warrior

WindClan
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ThunderClan
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SkyClan
Whiteheart<----Deputy

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« Reply #1 on May 29, 2008, 2:22pm »

EEP! Before you finish! Please, the second part of a name is always LOWERCASE. Maplestar, Dancingstream, Whiteheart... please do that everywhere!
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« Reply #2 on May 29, 2008, 5:09pm »

Okay I changed them an am Finished!
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« Reply #3 on May 29, 2008, 8:25pm »

You forgot the Hawktalons and Whiteheart in title and NAME. Oh, and you don't need the leader name in past and future names, just put: Whitekit, Whitepaw.

Nightsong sounds like a girl's name, Teehee! ^^;;

Maplestar wasn't leader then... when you said Maplestar made her a warrior. Also, you need to actually say in the history that she had her apprentice. Also... what she did with her kit sounds sort of exactly like Maplestar. Don't make it because another cat would destroy the Clan, change it up a little. Also, kill off any people in the relationships that you won't be roleplaying or putting up for adoption. Hawktalon you definitely aren't aloud to roleplay because two of your own cats can't be mates.
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« Reply #4 on May 29, 2008, 8:31pm »

I'll fix it in the morning and Hawktalon is Kessel
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Dapplepool<----Warrior

WindClan
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SkyClan
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« Reply #5 on May 30, 2008, 3:22pm »

Fixed and I'm putting her sisters and brother up for adoption
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WindClan
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ThunderClan
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SkyClan
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« Reply #6 on May 30, 2008, 3:38pm »

Just noticed; WindClan is all the way on the other side of the forest. xD Want to change that to ThunderClan? You also have to say what happened to Snowpaw; did she make it to warrior or did she die as an apprentice? Is she dead? Are you putting her up for adoption?
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« Reply #7 on May 30, 2008, 3:45pm »

Oh Dang xD
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Dapplepool<----Warrior

WindClan
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SkyClan
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« Reply #8 on May 30, 2008, 3:50pm »

Fixed and I am putting Snowpaw who is now Snowstorm now up for adoption too
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Mintpaw<----Apprentice

RiverClan
Dapplepool<----Warrior

WindClan
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ThunderClan
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SkyClan
Whiteheart<----Deputy

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« Reply #9 on May 30, 2008, 5:17pm »

Accepted my deputy! ^^ Just try to fix the WhiteHeart/Whiteheart business, tay? ^^
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« Reply #10 on May 30, 2008, 5:18pm »

Okay
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WindClan
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ThunderClan
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SkyClan
Whiteheart<----Deputy

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