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Rippleclaw; WindClan Warrior « Thread Started on Jun 2, 2008, 6:02pm »
200 WP
Name: Rippleclaw
Past and Future Names: Ripplekit>>Ripplepaw>>Rippleclaw
Gender: Tom
Age: 38 moons
Clan: WindClan
Rank: Warrior
Picture: Pic from WARRENPHOTOGRAPHIC I do not claim Personality: He is a quiet cat who likes to stick his nose where it doesn't belong. The warrior always seems stiff and weary, but if he really is Rippleclaw says nothing of it and bares it. The betrayal of one's kin can leave you scarred for life. He often likes to hunt in pairs, always suspicious of any rogues or loners passing through. The WindClan cat has learned to be particularly wary of the cats that do not belong in his home. Rippleclaw is easily startled. Sometimes he prefers herbs to fresh-kill, and will tear up strands of tansy, or horsetail. His favorite thing to do is to relax in a tree. Thanks to bad judgment here and there, he tells few where he's headed.
Description: He is a silver tortoiseshell tom with much cream on his pelt. His eyes are hazel, ever changing in tone. Rippleclaw's tail has flecks of brown and black all down it. The WindClanner's nose is laced with black, and his muzzle soft tan. His ears also hold this soft brown color. His pelt is unusually stiff, but nevertheless well groomed. He's of unusual length.
History:This will be the history of Ripplefur, Falconspirit and Rainshadow. 1-9 moons Rainkit was an ambitious cat who could only talk about what he would do when he grew older. Ripplekit was interested in his fantasies, but Falconkit ignored them. The WindClan cats were ambitious and always were thinking up new things. When they became apprentices, (Ripplekit to Hazepelt, Rainkit to Beartooth, Falconkit's mentor is no longer living as his parents and no one cares to mention his name because of the hatred bestowed upon him- Thunderstrike) they were eager to learn, Ripplepaw and Rainpaw were most interested in how to survive instead of fighting, which came naturally to both. Beartooth was a large cat, and Hazepelt was a master of stealth. Thunderstrike had agreed at the time to help train with the parents of the three, and proved a better mentor for a cat to learn fighting skills than known.
10-20 moons It turned out that Rainpaw spent the most time training with Thunderstrike, and he cared for him much as if he were a father. Beartooth was always uneasy about it. Ripplepaw was extremely close to their mother, and she died in battle with RiverClan. The three were always in hatred of this clan, but it died away when they became warriors. You can see their names below. Falconspirit didn't feel ready, but the others were eager as a kit to be an apprentice. It was just after becoming a warrior that Thunderstrike and Rainshadow began to plot like Tigerstar. Ripplefur knew of this, but it was secret to Falconspirit who was shocked and devastated when they put their plan to the test.
21-30 moons They both wanted power, and were not intending to kill of the other or even invoke any type of harm. No, they were to close. They attacked the leader of the clan who had greencough. The deputy was almost slain by Rainshadow's paws, but it was Falconspirit who stopped him by giving him an almost deadly wound. Rippleclaw was the cat who brought death to Thunderstrike, a moon later after they fled. They didn't need to be told they were banished. Falconspirit lost half his ear against his brother, Rainshadow, but grew to a fiery spirited cat. Rippleclaw was in shock, and accused of helping him. He fought with words, like LeopardClan and they began to lose suspicions.
30-38 Rippleclaw and Falconspirit made an effort to keep away from one another as not to arise suspicions of them plotting like their brother. Rainshadow stays in no place long, and viciously avoids the clans. Now and then he'll strike WindClan, or his brothers. At about 30 moons, he met a cat, Rosetta. She was a tall she-cat and she had his kits. Only Sleekkit survived, a female. Currently, he is 8 moons. He travels with his father, Rainshadow. Rippleclaw and Falconspirit despise the thieving cat, who Rainshadow has personally apprenticed.
Joined: May 2008 Gender: Female Posts: 193 Karma: 0
Re: Rippleclaw; WindClan Warrior;Adoptable DONE « Reply #1 on Jun 2, 2008, 7:04pm »
Don't put Ripplestar.
38 moons is NOT a senior warrior. I'd say 50 is junior-senior warrior, 60-70 is normal, 80 is old, 80-90 is elder (unless they decide to retire early).
I'm pretty sure the picture is tabby, not tortie... xD