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 Silentfire, Deputy of WindClan (Finished)
« Thread Started on May 24, 2008, 5:23pm »




Name:
Silentfire

Past and Future Names:
Silentkit -> Silentpaw -> Silentfire

Gender:
Tom

Age:
21 Moons

Clan:
WindClan

Rank:
Deputy

Picture:
[image]

Personality:
Silentfire is, obviously, a rather quiet cat. He doesn't talk much unless he's talked to, and replies only with what he needs to say. Why waste energy sharing tongues? Unless, of course, it is with Lonestar, their Medicine Cat, or some of the older warriors. He was also given the name "Silent" because of his ability to run and walk practically unheard through any forest. Although it may take him a little while longer than other cats, he does a good job of sneaking around and tracking enemies. He holds a neutral opinion on life and is neither pessimistic, nor optimistic; instead, he looks at a situation from a blank point of view and gets what he can out of it, always giving an honest opinion. Because of this, he holds no grudges against any of the clans, and he feels no threat from the Shards Cats beside the fact that they don't believe in StarClan. Kittypets and Rogues are of no interest to him, either.
Silentfire won't bother to try not to hurt the feelings of other cats. If he tells the truth, they can make whatever the want of it, but he never purposefully insults anyone in his clan.

Description:
Silentfire is a mostly white cat with orange ears, a black nose, and dark green eyes. His paws are all white except for his back left paw, which has a spot of black on it. The left side of his face is also black, while the other half has several spots of orange. His underbelly is white, but the top part of his coat is made up of big spots of orange and black. His tail is a mix of orange, white, and black, with a patch on it from a battle several moons ago.

History:
Silentfire's parents were two WindClan cats named Hazeleye and Greentail. His mother, apparently, was nothing like him or most of the WindClan cats; his father was a ShadowClan cat, and his mother was a WindClan cat. She died when he became a warrior, in a battle that he participated in against ThunderClan. This never affected him too much. His father also died in a battle Silentfire was in, and this was the battle where he received a large patch on his tail.
As a kit, he was quiet and never got into any trouble; as an apprentice, he did only what he was told and extra with a lack of much else to do. His mentor, Duskrunner, taught him much and was able to take advantage of the fact that he was a fast learner. When he became a warrior, he began sticking up for his clan more and more. In a harsh battle between them and ShadowClan, Silentfire made a decision to stay at camp instead of go out with the rest of the attackers; he'd had a hunch that the other clan would come to their camp instead, and they ended up doing so. He was able to send an apprentice to the place where they were supposed to battle and get the warriors back to camp in time to defend themselves. It was this battle where his mentor, Duskrunner, died defending their camp. Silentfire was one of the cats to sit vigil for him. Several days later he received Cherrypaw as an apprentice, and with the recent death of Duskrunner, decided to teach her everything he possibly could.
Because of the many battles he participated in and his quick thinking from the one battle, he was chosen as deputy once Lonestar became leader.

Relationships:
Mother:
Hazeleye (Deceased)
Father:
Greentail (Deceased)
Siblings:
Brokenclaw (Disappeared)
Mate:
None
Kits:
None
Mentor:
Duskrunner (Deceased)
Apprentice:
Cherrypaw
Other:
Cherrypaw; Neice

Other: Nothing else.

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 Re: Silentfire, Deputy of WindClan (Finished)
« Reply #1 on May 26, 2008, 12:04pm »

You only need the secret image for the first bio. In the beginning of the history, you put her mother was blah blah and her father was blah blah. Also, it's quite impossible, as I said about Lonestar, to become a deputy you'd have to be older than 19 moons unless there's a really good reason; the only time that's happened is with Firestar, and I think he was older than 19 moons. You can't tell with the time skips.

And yeah, Brokenclaw can be her brother. xD I forgot that he was one I created; a dark tortoiseshell. Hey, congrats. You have a niece! xD Also, you need an apprentice to be a deputy. Want Cherrypaw?
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 Re: Silentfire, Deputy of WindClan (Finished)
« Reply #2 on May 26, 2008, 5:17pm »


What do you mean blah blah? Did I rant too much about the parents? o.o;
Added a bunch to his history, also. ^^


Yeah, Cherrypaw would be great as an apprentice. ^^ I was thinking about that, actually.
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 Re: Silentfire, Deputy of WindClan (Finished)
« Reply #3 on May 26, 2008, 5:26pm »

No, I was just pointing out that you put HER, which you still didn't fix. xD ANd put when he got Cherrypaw as an apprentice.
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 Re: Silentfire, Deputy of WindClan (Finished)
« Reply #4 on May 26, 2008, 5:29pm »


Oh XD Sheesh, I totally missed that. Right, fixed that, and put in the time when he got Cherrypaw as an apprentice.
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Flowerpaw~RiverClan Apprentice
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 Re: Silentfire, Deputy of WindClan (Finished)
« Reply #5 on May 26, 2008, 5:31pm »

Aaaaaaccepted. =P
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