Lonestar of Windclan « Thread Started on May 25, 2008, 12:15pm »
Name: Lonestar
Past and Future Names: Lonekit, Lonepaw, Lonepeak
Gender: Male
Age: 29 moons
Clan: Windclan
Rank:Leader
Lives: 9
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Personality: Lonestar is a sharp, calculating cat. He can be quiet and gentle but it is rare that he doesn't add his aggressive side into any discussion. His Clan sees the nicer side of him, the rest of the Clans have to deal with a short-tempered and stubborn cat. Though he is not reasonable he dislikes backing down and rarely stops halfway through an argument. He hardly ever lets anyone insult him, its not something he takes kindly to. Lonestars intelligence and quick wit are his saving grace it is rare he is wrong about something. He is fiercely loyal to his Clan and feels a constant need to protect them, the habit e picked up while still an apprentice, even the cats older than him he felt close to and wanted to keep safe.
Description: Lonestar is part flame point siamese, part calico he is a mostly white cat with orange red markings around his face, paws, and tail, his calico side also shows adding grey to the markings around his paws,face, and tail. His coat also darkens along his spine to a silvery grey, which fades into the white around it. His eyes are a pale blue-grey, not clam but strangely powerfull for their mute color. His build follows that common of his Clan he is slight, and very fast because of it.
History: Lonestar received the name Lonekit when born because he was the only kit his brother having been dead before he entered the world he was not named. Lonestar was never told about him but he often has strange dreams of a cat that looks kind of like himself who seems to be mute. Lonestar lived a normal life untill he neared the end of his apprenticeship. His mentor died in a fight with some Shadowclan cats, Lonepaw had been unable to help and the guilt sat with him for a long time. His friend Leafpaw became a warrior at the same time as he did. She had helped him through his guilt and having known her since he was a kit they were close friends.
His first apprentice was Quillpaw, a young tom with a dark black-brown pelt and white specks that ran over his back. His attitude annoyed Lonepaek at first but after awhile they developed a relationship, which included Lonepeak having to rescue him time nd time again from whatever he had gotten himself into. After some time of training with the young cat he became known as Quillpelt, earning his warrior name after turning the tables and helping Lonepeak out of a sticky situation. Lonepeak however continued to watch his first apprentice's back. Several Moons later he became deputy when the one before him passed away.
Leafpelt died after he became deputy, a sickness had caught her that the medicine cat hadn't seen before and she joined starclan. Lonestar gave no more though to a a mate or love for a long time after. He is starting to warm up to the idea again, but not very quickly.
His first test as deputy was a group of loners, led by a strange and somewhat intrusive cat. Lonepeak the deputy would have tured them away at once if he had the authority the Leader however accepted the loners into the Clan, they had grown short on members. Lonepeak watched them closely the entire time growing more and more suspicious but the leader had forbade him to bother them so he held his tongue. The leader died when the loners attacked him in hopes of taking the position for themselves. Lonestar was out of camp but returned to the full-scale brawl and seeing what was happening wasted no time in driving the out and causing pain at the same time. he had always known they weren't any good. The leader lost his last life to his injuries. Lonepeak became Lonestar after visiting the moonstone and has since been hostile to loners. If the seek to join his Clan, or cross his borders they will have a very long and hard road in front of them.
Relationships: Mother: Snowfall - deceased Father: Oakpelt - deceased Siblings: None. Mate: None. As of yet. Kits: None as of yet. Mentor: Brackenfrost - deceased Apprentice: Quillpaw (now Quillpelt) Other: Nope.But this space is more than happy to be filled if anyone is interested.
Other: Lonestar's nameless brother haunts his dreams occasionally, usually trying to warn his brother of danger or something else.
Roleplay Example: The fresh smell that came with Newleaf was rich in the morning air, cool and wet the grass left beads of water on his fur as he passed through it. Lonepeak was not as serene as the large moor he staked, his mind was troubled by those loners. He had seen them sharing prey together huddled in a corner of the camp, not talking to the other cats, speaking in low whispers. They were not to be trusted, he didn't understand why the leader had let them in. They were obviously up to something and Lonepeak was doing his best to hinder anything they tried to do and work their paws off at the same time. They hated him for it but he didn't care he was expressly forbade from fighting them. He hissed in contempt at the thought if he was allowed he would already have fought the loners out of the Clan they did not belong and their names weren't earned.
He stopped as the smell of mouse disrupted his thoughts. Newleaf and the following seasons made it hard for him to hunt but he was brilliant in leafbare, when he blended perfectly into the snowy moor. He padded forward silently, crouching in the grass and stalking towards the scent there was a bush there the scent of mouse was strong he peered closer and saw a mouse scurry into the bush he lookd closer and saw that she seemed to have a nest there, indeed there were wriggling pink bodies waiting for her in the bush. They would be tasty, but he would leave them. There would be more meat on them when older. He turned and headed back towards the camp. He would need to arrangee the dawn patrol.
He was halfway back when his vision suddnely dissapeared, darkness surrounded him and there in front of him was that cat, almost his mirror image but with a darker pelt and more of the calico markings he tom looked at him and the fear-scent combined with the scared look in its eyes was enough to tell him something was wrong. The darkness dissapeared and he was left in the blinding light of morning blinking. A moment after he had regained his senses he shot off like a rocket headed for camp, his speed was something to be admired as he was one of the fastest in the clan. Not fast enough however he realized as he drew closer the sounds of battle on the air. He leapt into camp and froze for a moment taking in the scene before him. The loners were grappling with the clan cats, the black one was toying with the leader, who seemed to be seriously injured. He had been right.
There was no need to hold back his hate for them now and a fearsome yowl echoed around the camp, making several cats pause and look to see what had happened, which was a shame for them. Lonepeak jumped at the nearest loner, fangs bared and claws out. His fierce hate fueled him and after a few moments of clawing at the first loner he'd gotten his paws on she yowled in protest and he let her go, she ran quickly from the camp. Another clan cat had beaten a loner as a seond one followed her. Lonepeak smiled and dodged a pair of cats as he jumped at the lack cat taunting Raspstar.
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Re: Lonestar of Windclan « Reply #1 on May 26, 2008, 11:53am »
Okay. First, the first sentence of the history is run-on. Please fix it. Also, it's quite impossible for him to be 19 moons and leader. I mean, if they become warriors at 12-ish moons, there would have to be a good reason for his leader to trust him that much to make him that young of a deputy.
Also, he would have needed to have an apprentice in order to become deputy.
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Re: Lonestar of Windclan « Reply #3 on May 26, 2008, 5:57pm »
If his dead brother is in StarClan (which he is) he'd still be a kit. You know that, correct? Also, I'd have to be the brother when he haunts you because it is a form of a message from StarClan.
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